New Adapted Script - Introverts and Extroverts
What Went Well
With making a new adapted script from my groups feedback, we needed to include some form of more and new information. I included in my own part, for when i filmed my contributors interviews and other useful coverage shots. The pages of my own participant to the new script, are pages five to six. Those specific pages are about my contributors introductions to the documentary, the targeted shots i want to achieve and the specific rooms of my household where i shall be filming. Plus, another location of concluding one of my contributors interviews. In my opinion though, this second (adapted) script is presented with more detail and interest compared to our first draft before receiving feedback.
Even Better If
To improve for a third draft if needed, i could of described a bit more detail of what the rooms look like from when reading the script and giving a good and detailed explanation to visualise what the rooms of my household may or actually look like.
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